Above is the second draft of my script. I’ve deleted some of the scenes and made the pace quicker. I still have an issue with the dialogue between characters and also have too much exposition. I will update in a few days.
Above is the second draft of my script. I’ve deleted some of the scenes and made the pace quicker. I still have an issue with the dialogue between characters and also have too much exposition. I will update in a few days.
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